Nov. 1 Editing this Essay

So today I had practice for powder puff and cheerleading and it was pretty good. I talked to Mrs. Catherell about my essay and she said that she would help me with it. I always have this problem where the writing is good but its not focused and structured. I need to work on that before college because my thoughts always come faster then what I can type or write. Working on the structure of my experience essay tonight wish  me luck.